Why did the British lose the American Revolution? Discuss the advantages/disadvantages each side held, their preconceptions going in, and the decisions made on the field, 1775-1781.
The essay included a thesis statement that is clear, appears in the introduction, stakes out an arguable position, and is developed throughout the essay.
The thesis statement is supported by at least FOUR (4) talking points — independent facts, theories, or concepts taken from the textbook, the lectures, or from outside sources
The discussion of the talking points is well developed and adequate to support the student’s arguments. In short, the evidence presented is sufficient to support the thesis,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,